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Syllabus

 

 

Junior High Writing Workshop Syllabus

 

Teacher:                      Mary M.  Richardson

 

Focus Skills:                Communicate effectively

                                    Persist in achieving quality

Description

 

Welcome to writing workshop. Our goal is to become better writers of a variety of forms, genres, and styles—and to have fun while doing it!

 

Writing workshop class includes:

 

·       Mini-lessons

·       Independent writing on topics of your choice

·       Mini writing conferences with your teacher

·       Sharing in-progress or finished work with the group

 

An important part of the course is to build a writing portfolio—a thick folder holding all of your drafts and finished writing pieces. Each quarter, you will choose two pieces from your portfolio that you think represent your best work. You will complete a self-evaluation form for each of these pieces, and taken together they will count for 60% of your portfolio grade. Toward the end of the quarter, you will have a special conference to discuss your portfolio and overall performance in the course. At that time, you will talk about your accomplishments and set goals for the future.

 

Materials

·       Writing tools (paper, pens, pencils, and erasers)

·       A small writer’s notebook

·       A writing folder (provided)

·       Two books by Ralph Fletcher

·       Laptop computer (recommended)

 

Grading System

 

Assignment
Percentage

 

Weekly grade for effort and following directions

First piece of writing

Second piece of writing

Third piece of writing

Workshop participation (following rules and procedures; completing forms; taking part in discussions, writing conferences, and in-class exercises; organizing the writing portfolio)

                      

 

15

25

25

25

        10

 

Total:

100

* Portfolio item

 

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Homework

Unless otherwise specified, the regular homework is as follows:

  • Completing independent studies (usually due on Friday)
  • Preparing for independent quizzes (given on Monday)

 

Less-frequent homework assignments include:

  • Writing in your notebook
  • Working on your current writing piece (any phase)

 

Lateness

 

Please arrive to class on time. If you are late, you will lose participation points for the day.

 

Spirit of the Classroom

 

Many principles protect the “sacred space” of the New School classroom. Below are ten principles that form its foundation, and which we should promote every chance we have. We should:

 

1.     Guarantee the physical and psychological safety of each person.

2.     Focus each person’s attention on the subject at hand.

3.     Create a sense of fairness and fair play within the classroom.

4.     Invite everyone’s participation.

5.     Challenge ourselves and each other to think in new and different ways.

6.     Recognize that the foundation of knowledge begins with what each person already knows and believes.

7.     Relate clearly and meaningfully to the objectives, goals, and standards of the class.

8.     Encourage the best in each person.

9.     Respect the class’s sense of organization and coherence.

10.  Speak up when we perceive behaviors that undermine a positive, active educational space.

 

Students and faculty will collaborate in the construction and nurturance of the sacred space of the classroom. 

 

 

Grading Rubric

Name:  ______________________                Title:  ______________________________

 

Date:  _______________________              Grade:  _____________________________

 

Grading Rubric for Writing, V3

 

Categories

Points Worth

Points Off

1.   Lead

(Grabs & holds reader’s interest; aims at specific audience.) 

5

 

2.   Voice

      (It is in 1st, 2nd or 3rd person; casual or formal; clear, active, authentic, convincing & appropriate for story & audience.) 

5

 

3.   Who?

(Characters are adequately developed; characters interact; dialogue used.)

5

 

4.   When?

(Time is clear & effective; hot spots are slowed down; boring sections are cut; flashbacks are used as needed.)

5

 

5.   Where?

(Setting is vivid & appropriate for mood, plot & characters.)

5

 

6.   What is the problem?

(Conflict is clear, stated early & doesn’t end too quickly.)

5

 

7.   What are they doing?

(Action is believable and entertaining.)

5

 

8.   How do the characters feel?

(Feelings are authentic.)

5

 

9.   How does the piece end?

(Resolution is satisfying.  It might be humorous, circular, surprising, emotional, or some combination of these.  Ending doesn’t go on too long.) 

5

 

10.  Use of details and vivid descriptions 

      (Writing is low on food chain; gives lots of supporting details, and creates vivid mental pictures.)

5

 

11.  Use of varied, active verbs.

(Uses a variety of active verbs.)

5

 

12.  Overall organization and flow

      (Organization is clear and logical and flows smoothly.)

5

 

13.  Reflects editing and revising

10

 

14.  Overall effort, creativity & research as needed

     (Quotes and research are completely acknowledged

     using MLA format.)

10

 

15.  Grammar, punctuation, and spelling

20

 

 

TOTAL points off:

 

 

100

 

 

 

Due Dates

1st page of 1st piece is due on Friday, April 24th.

2nd page of 1st piece is due on Friday, May 1st

1st page of 2nd piece is  due on Friday, May 8th.

2nd page of 2nd piece is due on Friday, May 15th.

1st page of 3rd piece is due on Friday, May 22nd.

2nd page of 3rd piece is due on Friday, May 29th.


Students must write one (1) story, which can be  either fiction or non-fiction.

They must also write a second piece of a different genre  (opposite of their story).

The third piece may be of any genre or may be an extension of one of the first 2 pieces.   

Editing Checklist

Writing Workshop, Editing Checklist

 

Name & Date:

 

Title:

 

Genre:

 

SKILL

STUDENT

TEACHER

1.  Lead:  (Choose 1 of these.)

·      Is it a grabber or does it introduce the narrator? 

·      Does it help establish the mood?  

 

 

 

2.  Setting  (Place and Time):  (Choose 1 of these.)

·      Have I clearly described it? 

·      Is it helping create the mood and shape the plot? 

  • Have I used time effectively, using fast-forward or slow-motion when helpful?
  • Have I focused on a narrow slice of time?
  • Have I cut any unnecessary words or sections? 
  • Have I slowed down the crucial moments, the hot spots?
  • Have I used flashbacks to reveal what important memories affect the character? 

 

 

 

3.  Voice:  (Choose 1 of these.)

  • Do I know my audience, who I’m writing this for?
  • Am I writing in 1st, 2nd or 3rd person?  Is it effective?
  • Does the voice I am using (conversational, formal, etc) fit the story, the character?
  • Is it honest and passionate?

 

 

 

4.  Characters:  (Choose 1 of these.)

  • Have I named them in a way that suggests their personality?
  • Have I given a physical description of them, using all five senses?
  • Have I gotten them moving with gestures and actions?
  • Have I gotten them talking?
  • Have I made them complex, with both good and bad characteristics?
  • Have I limited the number of main characters so I don’t confuse the reader?

 

 

 

5.  Conflict:  (Choose 1 of these.)

  • Have I added some quickly enough, either:  person against person, person against nature or internal conflict?
  • Have I resolved the conflict satisfactorily?

 

 

 

6.  Ending:  (Choose 1 of these.)

·      Is it satisfying? 

·      Is it humorous, circular, surprising, emotional, or some combination of these? 

·      Does it trust the reader and not try to do too much?

 

 

 

7.  Editing:  (Choose THREE of these.)

  • Have I read it out loud and listened to the rhythm?
  • Have I varied the pace of sentences? 
  • Am I writing low on the food chain, giving underlying details rather than main ideas? 
  • Have I given enough details for the reader to build vivid, mental pictures? 
  • Are my details authentic?  Are they recurring?
  • Have I tried surprising comparisons using similes and metaphors?  
  • Have I pruned out the small words that qualify how I feel and think?  Cut all words that are unnecessary?
  • Have I cut clutter and tightened my writing by using precise language?
  • Have I started new paragraphs and indented when needed?
  • Have I avoided passive tense whenever possible? 
  • Have I chosen strong verbs? 
  • Have I used contractions when appropriate to bring a more natural voice to my writing?

 

 

 

8.  Proofreading:  (Do ALL of these.)

  • Do all my subjects and verbs agree?
  • Did I begin each sentence with a capital letter?
  • Did I use capital letters for all proper nouns and the main words of the title?
  • Did I end each sentence with the proper punctuation? 
  • Did I use commas for lists and compound sentences?
  • Did I use quotation marks and paragraph form to show when people are speaking?
  • Did I look up and correct the spelling of any words I am unsure of?